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[Essay/영작] (토플-081) Has technology made the world a better place to live?
최고관리자  |  20-06-01 00:59
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world 
a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. (전문보기)

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⓵ 주제문 -> Many aspects of the world are both good and bad and are constantly changing, change that 
can commonly be attributed to technology.

⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, technological advancements have life more convenient. 

⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, developments in medical technology have allowed people to live longer, healthier lives.

⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, many people focus on the disadvantages and problems associated with technology, 
but I believe that the benefits far outweigh the negative aspects.