⓵ 주제문 -> Many aspects of the world are both good and bad and are constantly changing, change that
can commonly be attributed to technology.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First, technological advancements have life more convenient.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Second, developments in medical technology have allowed people to live longer, healthier lives.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In conclusion, many people focus on the disadvantages and problems associated with technology,
but I believe that the benefits far outweigh the negative aspects.