
What change would make your hometown more appealing to people your age?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. (전문보기)
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⓵ 주제문 -> Everything in the universe is in constant change. And everything needs continual improvement
if the ever changing and increasing demands of humankind are to be met.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> It is said that information is power. True saying indeed!
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> The way people learn would be another important thing that a fast, free and
reliable Internet service could better in my hometown.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> Since its advent, Internet touched every part of our life.