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[Essay/영작] (토플-006) What would you change one thing about your hometown?
최고관리자  |  17-01-30 10:47
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? 
Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.

Comparison Type: 당신의 고향을 바꿀 수 있다면 무엇을 바꾸겠습니까?

 주제문 -> If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be air pollution problem, 
and I will give the following reasons to explain why I want to solve the problem.  

 뒷받침 문장 1 -> The first and most important reason is that I hope that my hometown can become a beautiful city. 

 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Another reason why I want to change my hometown's air pollution situation is 
that the city's development needs clean and tidy environment to attract investors.

 마무리 문장 -> In my mind, changing air pollution will apparently be my first choice if I can change 
one important thing about my hometown.