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[인강과정] L(TOEFL)-010 성공과 행운의 관계는?
최고관리자 | 16-04-30 18:24
'When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.'
Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above?
Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position. (전문보기)
Opinion Type : 성공과 행운의 관계는?
⓵ 주제문 -> I fully agree with the claim that there is no correlation between success and luck.
⓶ 뒷받침 문장 1 -> First of all, considering an education and a career as key factors of success, one will choose
to pursue a degree from a college or a university.
⓷ 뒷받침 문장 2 -> Secondly, it is impossible to make a career if one is indolent and lacking knowledge, at least
in developed countries. Luck plays no role in achieving this success.
⓸ 마무리 문장 -> In sum, as long as someone understands success as an ability to turn into reality some of
his dreams and goals, he will have to work hard because he will need money.
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